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Beauty of Music by ~mad4moosic:iconmad4moosic:

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When that perfect pitched G
First cleansed my ears,
Life began.

When the hard wood
Softened under my fingers,
I was entrapped.

When I could hear tunes
Tooting from people like me,
I wasnt alone.

Just beautiful, pure ecstasy
My love, eternal,
Sweet sounds.

The beauty of music
With me forever,
Meant to be.
©2005-2009 ~mad4moosic
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~sweetheart18 Mar 31, 2005, 3:00:36 PM
Awesome poem. You definitely brought to life the beauty in music. :clap:

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~EmptyCasket Mar 31, 2005, 8:04:30 PM
Oh you're good. Wonderful choice of words. It's like romantic poetry, only you're expressing your love for music.

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~Strange-Foreigner Apr 1, 2005, 1:30:22 AM
Damn, talk about progress this is my all time favourite written by you :)
:hug:

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~mad4moosic Apr 1, 2005, 7:35:45 AM
Thanks! :P

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:music: I'm a soulman. Woman. Thing. You get the idea. :music:
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~mad4moosic Apr 1, 2005, 7:38:33 AM
Thanks!! Wooh.. Im making progress! Lol..

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:music: I'm a soulman. Woman. Thing. You get the idea. :music:
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~mad4moosic Apr 1, 2005, 7:40:18 AM
Woohooooo!!! Im getting good!! Suddenly Im getting comments off people I dont even know saying my work is good rather than my friends who just say it to make me feel better!! Woohoooo!! :P :P Thanks!

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:music: I'm a soulman. Woman. Thing. You get the idea. :music:
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~Strange-Foreigner Apr 1, 2005, 10:00:33 AM
Honestly :) this one is less lyrical than most of your other work which makes it much more poetic which makes it less cliché which makes it better which means that I do like this :)

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The trouble with most of us is that we would rather be ruined by praise than saved by criticism.
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~EmptyCasket Apr 1, 2005, 10:06:50 AM
Wow, glad I got you so excited. Have you been commenting on other peoples' stuff? That gets some people to check your out in return ... And yes, you are good.

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"...So if they see me they won't stop me will they? I mean ... I have the right to be naked on a camera right?" my words on Yahoo Privacy policies; Webcams.
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~mad4moosic Apr 1, 2005, 10:12:00 AM
Lol.. kewl.. I'll keep that in mind..

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:music: I'm a soulman. Woman. Thing. You get the idea. :music:
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